So I got my report back today from my first activity... the nail project...
so here is what I got back...
Scott,I can tell this was a real challenge for you and it sounds like you learned a lot for it!
I would have liked you to insteal give a summary of the realtions in your paper/highlights rather than all of them a bit much to get trhrough at time difficult to follow. i wanted a conclusion to your paper, what you learn about yourself. what did you learn about societal views through the reactions there's some which done there!? not sure if I understand that....
17/20 oh and no report holder in the future please!
She did make notes on comments that people wrote... She made a major comment on "Holy Crap your not going to the dark side now are you!" she said intersting.... is being feminne the "dark side"! LOL
Hey I am happy that this is my first paper and I got 17/20 THAT's good right!
3 comments:
Thats great Scott! I love when I get a good grade on something I felt I worked really hard on!
It is great. Keep it up.
Excellent work...especially if you listen to the instructor's direction and to clarifying and communicating your ideas...Love, mom
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